Detective Dudes :: Neil's Revenge

Detective Dudes : Neil’s Revenge

Neil Daniels who, by the age of ten, is already a Oxford graduate school student and has developed a DNA Tracker software. Neil now in the final stage of his second major work, an artificial intelligence system called Krogos, in a heavily guarded room. Neil has been under the guardianship of Thomas Chappel, owner of the software giant Sunbird.Inc., since his mother died. He has been put under a rigorous study program and has a somewhat deprived childhood. One night, at the top of the Sunbird building where Neil lives, Neil finishes Krogos, sending the software through the telephone lines and after, his computer shows the message "Krogos Sailed Out." The security guards become suspicious and try to enter Neili's room. When they finally break into Neil's room with Chappel, Neil is not in the room. He leaps off the top of the building to his death. The image on his computer screen shows an ark sailing in water and the words "Good-bye Neil"

Two years later, at the City Hall, Sunbird, Inc., holds a demonstration of a virtual reality game system called Cocoon. Many kids, including the Kimi Mattews, Olivia, Troy, Alex who call themselves “Detective Dudes:”  are invited to the demonstration. However, only the kids with badges are chosen for the demonstration. Doctor Matt and Jimmy Mattews (Kimi’s father who is a famous Detetive) arrive at the City Hall. Dr.Matt gives Kimi Mattews a badge and tells Kimi that his mother, Vivian Mattews, would not be there because of an alumni reunion. The rest of Detective Dudes trick a few kids by exchanging badges for the Premium Pokemon Cards. They all use the badges and participate in the demonstration.

In another room, Duke Osbourn , one of the designer of Cocoon, is murdered. Osbourn's types in a dying message: the letters J, T and R. Kimi discovers the murder and decides to participate in the demonstration, hoping that the game would lead him to an answer. Jimmy Mattews finds out that J-T-R stands for "Jack The Ripper".

When the demonstration begins, Neil's artificial intelligence system, Krogos takes control of the game system Cocoon and tells the audience in a metallic voice “if all fifty kids in the demonstration lose the game, it will kill the kids with a large electromagnetic burst. The kids in the demonstration are given a choice of five stages in the game”

Kimi and the Detective Dudes choose the final stage, a re-creation of an 1800 London mystery.

It was almost accurate recreation of 1800 London with smog all around and suddenly Detective Boys hear a scream of Jack The Ripper’s fourth victim and they rush toward it. Kimi discovers that Dr.Matt's inventions don't work. Kimi and his friends track down 221b Baker Street because Kimi think that his had who Designed the levels of Cocoon was a Sherlock Holmes fan would not develop a 1800’s London without Holmes. But they find that Holmes and Watson are at Dartmoor. However Holmes was supposed to be there. Jimmy discovers that Krogos has edited the Londen Level.   

Since Holmes is unable to help, the kids find Colonel Moran and Professor Moriarty. Moriarty tells Kimi that he trained Jack the Ripper when Jack The Ripper was a orphan who found Moriarty in slums. The professor gives the children a clue about the next victim, who turns out to be Irene Adler, Holmes's only love. They manage to save Irene and Kimi discovers that there was something wrong about Jack The Ripper’s second victim, Annie Chapman

 

In the real world, Jimmy investigates the Osbourn Murder case. Jimmy reveals that the murderer is the company's president, Thomas Chappel. Chappel is a descendant of Jack the Ripper who will stop at nothing to hide his secret. It is revealed that Neil found that proof of Chappel’s decendance with his DNA Tracker Software and so he pressurized Neil to suicide. Chappel is immediately arrested.

 

One by one, the children die in the game world until only three are left: Kimi, Olivia, and another child who is a rich spoiled brat- Marty. They follow Jack the Ripper to a runaway train. Kimi reveals that Jack The Ripper is actually a women passenger. Jack The Ripper’s actual intension was to kill Annie Chapman who was her mother who abandoned her.    

 

The murderer leads them to the top of the train. There, Jack the Ripper ties himself to Olivia and threatens Kimi. Olivia decides to save Kimi who her last hope and sacrifices herself by jumping off the train and into a valley, taking Jack the Ripper with her. But the murderer reveal in her dying word that only 5 minutes are remaining for the final station and the train’s speed is over 100km/hr  

 

As Kimi begins to lose hope, Sherlock Holmes, a bug by Krogos appears and gives useful advice that, “you are not bloodstrained yet.”  Eventually Kimi deduces and he along with Marty goes into the food coach and breaks all wine barrels in order to reduce shock while train crashed into the final station.  

 

Kimi and Marty survive the game. After winning the game, Kimi reveals that Marty is actually the Krogos in disguise. Then, all the children are released from the demonstration, and the Krogos destroys itself.

Fish keeping- seriously addicted

Hello

Do you like pets??...what kind of pets do you like?.... are they dogs....cats...birds....or fishes??

Well my favorite are fishes you know why??
You do need to take them for a walk.. nor they litter around.... neither they irritate you by making noise. You just need to clean their half tank(50%) weeky and feed them daily but I assure you its worth it. They start recoganizing you after some days and bang at the glass when you go near....they look schooo scweeet.  

I bascally love Malawi and South American fish like cichlids and black ghost knifefish and certain lybriths. I currently have 3 tanks:
#1: 30l x 12w x 12h  Malawi tank
Inhabitants:
2 Blue Dolphin
1 Electric Yellow Lab
1 Sunshine Peacock Hybrid
1 Yellow Banana
1 Black Ghost Knife Fish
1 Common Pleco
1 Kissing Gourami

#2: 18l x 9w x 12h :
Inhabitants:
14 Hockeystick Tetras
2 Girrafe Cichlids
2 Albino
1  Electric Yellow Lab
1 Common Pleco

#2: 12l x 5w x 9h:
1 Green Terror(named Ernie)

Battlefield 2047

Hello
Heres a short-story i wrote for my school homeworks. But then thought of expanding it and making it better...here it goes:

"In the year 2047 , Robots have became the necessity for humanity"

             Jake a ordinary teen with extraordinary thinking used to work in a scrap yard to run his home. He used to live grandfather who under stood him very well.


            One morning Jake received a big robot warped in box and tape. He started unwrapping it but after seeing a scary thing of grey metal with three giant robotic legs, like the tentacles of the octopus, he just couldn't stand still and ran away but he didn't knew while running he pressed the reset button of the tripodic robot and that was the biggest mistake of his life and a new mark in world history- "End of the World"


            The robot came to life and said in a metallic voice "Identity: Azka 112. Objective: the end of the humanity." The giant was about the height of a 4 floor building and his legs itself occupied 80% of its body and the a egg like  ball on top with five red eyes


            Azka first began to destroy the city than the country later aimed the world. It took no time to cover his tentacles with blood, he started killing people. Screams were heard everywhere. Blood layed on the streets. Terror began to spread . The Army, Navy and even Air Force were helpless in front of him. He was so fast that India's population was reduced to a few thousands 


            There a group of children were set to the mission to save the world. Jake said in a confident voice,"It began with me and will end with me." The trio of Jake, Darrick and Frank sat in a jets which was at junkyard but was not in good condition but still the trio used it. Azka had reached Russia. It in Moscow where he reduced it to debris. Broken wires.... half cut buildings with steel rods visible... busted water pipe and blood everywhere was what they witnessed but, Azka was not there. He reached Japan


              He was sitting on Tokyo Tower and was firing at army out there. It identified the trio coming and  started running towards a volcano-  Mt.Fujiyama. Frank shouted, "Shoot in the crater!!!" Darrick shot a missile and lava started flowing out! Red hot lava with black smoke ate the tripod and he was reduced to molten metal. Jake couldn't bear the guilt feeling and he exiled till the date he heard the news than another killer robot is spreading terror. Get set go...!!!!!                          

India Of My Dreams

Hello All!

Do you think that USA or UK has the best life style? Why don't forigners come to India in search of jods? Why is India still called a "under-devoloping country"? Why is'nt India called a "superpower"? Think About This!

The main reason is most of talented Indians soon become NRIs. Yeah! but even they have ambitions. But why can't they achive them here in India?. Because here only some politions can get their dreams. I just hate this system! Democracy suxx. I feel Communism rocks. You know I can give you an example- if a good aspiring polition says that "I m going to demolish slums and make here a clean healthy building". The opposite party will say "The Builder has bribed him". His name will get spoiled and he will give up the idea. So the slum will not be reconstructed. 


But in communism there are some disadvantages like people cannot vote. Hey! but now-a-days who cares? The day the got off for voting they celebrate it a vacation.  

Did you know that India is one of the four nations who have reached a trillion US$ Gross Domestic Product (GPD). But are we rich with more than 40% Indians suffering from poverty? Everyday more than 1500 people die of malnutrition... its a sad but true fact! And our government states India is so close becoming a "superpower"

India is much behind the world... when will we update? 

Have you seen the condition of roads? especially in monsoon... you won't get that is it a hole in the road or the road in the hole. Here a 8-storay building takes 3-4 years to complete most nation a 20-storay building takes that time. And finally our commonwealth games! Arn't 4 years enough to arrange them? The stadium is not complete... chances to get flooded... the roof are leaking.... its better not to host than spoiling the country's reputation.   

We need better communication! The world has started using 4G technology and we are still stuggling with 3G... here the maximun internet speed is 1mbps(that also only in multinational company's offices and HQ) while in other parts of the world its more than 3mbps at home 

I'm not blaming the politions after all politics begins from us!

"Aisa hota raha hai....aur aisa hi hota rahega"(its has always been like this.. and will remain like this)... my favourite line from the movie "Rang De Basanti"

So your choise if you want to bring the change or not....